Board Thread:Wiki discussion/@comment-26126721-20161007192257/@comment-4196050-20161009155200

HelperAt2150AD wrote: Redhuanhakim03 wrote: Also, I use grammar. It is good too.

Example: "You can play 3 games every day." Here's one more advanced. VOCABULARY

I write "Treading later through our earphones plus the 2013 BLOXtober.The whole map has just got trodden."  Walking later through our earphones plus the 2013 BLOXtober.The whole map has just got walked across. " There's a lot of passive voice in that segment. Maybe do something like We walked across the entire 2013 BLOXtober map through our earphones (even then it doesn't make too much sense, because earphones are not often associated with a way of walking).