Board Thread:ROBLOX help and discussion/@comment-27609304-20161020142620

First before I put my draft, I am just gonna say. If this not supposed to be here please tell me! As I am new to such things like this. And I need some help editing this draft. That would be nice. Thank you!

BlogBurg is a role play game that has elements such as the following, work, building (the building feature is for your house and your house only.) Friends, cooking, workouts, and many more! The game has a simple concept as well, you have to do work to gain money, to go to work you must have a job, a couple of these are, fishing, cashier at the wall Mart like building, and hair stylist! You can cook and gain experience from doing such actions, like playing on your computer or even cooking! Maybe write a book while reading one! (It is a possible bug but it is in beta at the moment.) Houses can be made with props that help you keep mood, mood is used for keeping your character healthy! The catagorys are: hunger, fun, energy, hygiene!

Mood- if your hygiene is low, then green smoke particles appear near your character and sometimes flys as well. If you are tired, you walk more slowly. If you have low hunger, ???. If you have low fun, ???. 