Thread:KupcakeKayla/@comment-29172867-20170214150221/@comment-30144972-20170329091000

KupcakeKayla, the problem with one of your edits is that you made it sound like a personal opinion. Yes, the majority of the community hates the package. However, you added:

"also the woman package is a pretty weird package if you say so myself."

That sentence makes it have bias and unprofessional. This is because of the phrase "if you say so myself", which shows agreement from... nobody? Just like in a history report, you don't want to include "I" or "you" (second person narrative) into the story. Besides, there is already a sentence about it on the page that is better at showing no bias and is worded to be professional.

"The package is also hated due to its questionable appearance along with the Man package."

As you can see, it tells the opinion of the community and not oneself.