User blog:SethiXzon/Beginning Project Cleanup - My effort to fix many of the terrible articles here.

As most editors here are aware of, nearly every article on this wikia is badly written, biased, lacks actual information compared to rumors and popular beliefs, and overall do not seem like proper information that a wikia should have.

Today, my largest accomplishment was cleaning up SonicTheHedgehogXX's rather violently biased page into something readable that did not take sides of an argument. Compare it from before and after; most notably these sections:

"SONICTHEHEDGEHOGXX is one of the well known players on Roblox, ranking up to 6.5 million place visits from his places. When talking about him, his name is usually shortened to STHXX, SONIC, SONICTHEHEDGEHOG or SONICXX. He's currently known to his clan (F.E.A.R., or "First Encounter Assault Recon," which is copied completely from the videogame, "FEAR") many users see him as a god of ROBLOX, while many others know him for copying places (with exploits, this was proven when he stole SharpTH place ) and using free models. His most popular place was his island resort."

This example has acceptable grammar and spelling examples, however the sentences do not flow propertly and some statements are biased, opinionated, and or not useful. Compare it to my cleaned up version.

"SONICTHEHEDGEHOGXX is a relatively famous ROBLOX user that has achieved rather controversial stereotypes throughout his history as a user. He currently resides as the leader of one of the largest groups in ROBLOX; First Encounter Assault Recon. SONIC has achieved a relatively poor reputation in the eyes of ROBLOX's community due to accusations of stealing places, copying ideas, and publishing notably popular places largely consisting of free models. These accusations primarily began when SONIC created Island Resort; which at the time was not only thought by ROBLOX's players to be poorly built, but also a direct copy of wierdoking's very own hotel, which was recieved with a much more positive responce compared to said place."

While the vocabulary used has marginally increased, the information remains the same without treating accusations as the truth. It also helps to sum up the article as an introductory paragraph should. Another example is of his places. Notice the differences between the two.

"Places created by SONIC
Some places that SONIC created:

Places
''Sonic's most famous place has to be the Island Resort. It is known to be (by most of the community) as an online dating place. This was reviewed by XiaoXiaoMan on YouTube. It was at first a copy of weirdoking's 5-Star Resort.''

Clan-dedicated places
''Some of his places are dedicated to his clan, F.E.A.R., like a recruitment center. Some are dedicated to his fandom for Sonic the Hedgehog, including his version of Sonic Adventure DX. After a bit of place browsing you'll find a "drive 100,000 miles to VIP" place and a "skate down a rainbow" place. THere is also a recruitment center for a clan called J.C..''

Other places
68 of his places are usually blank baseplates with "IDK" as the name but most of his places have a copyright, registered or trademark symbol at the end of them, including places he stole, like Live in Bikini Bottom (this place was removed as of 4th February 2011)"

It's painfully obvious to see how badly written this section is. The grammar seems to be based upon the rules of a small child that is still learning English. There are opinionated statements present, such as "It was at first a copy of weirdoking (which was technically spelled incorrectly)'s 5-Star Resort.". You can see the obvious lack of formality, as well. Make notice of the heading at the top that is completely useless, of course; it acts as an ugly tumor that has no purpose. Compare it to, yet again, a revised edition:

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Island Resort
''SONIC's most well-known place, generally tied directly to his name and existance, is Island Resort. Island Resort has been touted as a shoddily built playground for 'online daters', due to the seemingly high presence of users that pretend to 'date'. YouTube reviewer XiaoXiaoMan showcased Island Resort in a satirical review for his video series Raging ROBLOX Reviewer. It has garnered millions of views and is currently the sixth most visited place in ROBLOX.''

FEAR-related places
''Many of SONIC's places are dedicated to his primarily clan, FEAR. These places are recognized as the official 'bases' and points of operation for FEAR members.''

Other places
''SONIC has a large collection of unused baseplates, such as "idk" as well as actual games that are not related to FEAR. A large proportion of these places involve traveling upward, downward, through or into a certain object, such as "Cart Ride into Santa!", whereas others capitolize on the allure of Very Important People access, or VIP, to grant powers to those that purchase the appropriate wear from him."''

While some content that was inside of FEAR is now notably missing, said content was not actually related to the topic at hand and so was moved into the Other Places section of the paragraph.

As you can see, this is a beneficial project, and I do hope that by the time it is completed, the wikia will be looking even better than our official wikia.

If you have an issue with my edits; please, allow us to have a hearty and intellectually stimulating conversation about whether or not it deserves to stay.