Thread:Coljari/@comment-4360159-20190119071247/@comment-35998649-20190119173015

Well, firstly I would like to ask if you would add a space after commas and periods. When every sentence is like this,it shows poor structure.Very,very poor structure. This website I just found may be good to use to check if everything is okay grammar-wise. There is also Grammarly if you are familiar with how it works.

And I understand that you are adding more information to the page. Please, I beg of you, to at least make it clearly readable and understandable for readers and editors (and make sure that it's clear that you added more information that adds to the context of the text instead of making it look like you undid everything and hid important information inside of it).

Also, I saw that you added an unnecessary hyperlink for a player. Use  when linking to a player (I say the only exception to using this is when referring to YouTubers with a different username than their YouTube channel, i.e. Flamingo/Mrflimflam). In the case of another item (such as a catalog item or website feature), use wikilinks (the two brackets on both ends of a word) instead of hyperlinking.