Thread:Coljari/@comment-4360159-20190119071247/@comment-35998649-20190119201907

1. I never said you have poor grammar. I just said the way it was shown in the article wasn't appropriate for the wikia and maybe it should be double checked using those two sources or any other source you wish to use (I forgot to mention other great sources as well, such as StackExchange, where there are English professors and linguistics experts around). From what I've seen, the Roblox Wikia has a slight bias towards American English (concerning certain spelling styles and calendar dating styles) so keep that in mind when you're writing articles.

2. The split was more of a separation between "This is the important information about this subject" and "Here's what's been covered by the community about the subject" kind of thing. (It was also a stylistic choice on my end.)

3. You did have an unnecessary hyperlink which should have been used as a wikilink (but since it was linked to a player's page, the Player link template should've been used (read why: Template:Player link). There is no need to add a hyperlink (which is meant for external sites not related to the wikia) in one article that is intended to link to another article that is inside the wikia (the two brackets, which is what wikilinking is for).

For instance, I will use 's account as an example:

is the LEAST preferred way to link to the page. There is no need to use an out-of-site markup for a page that is on the same wikia.

is much more preferred. However, a pipe  should be added to show a "reader-friendly" name for it;   will show as ROBLOX instead of Community:ROBLOX.

However, the should be used over all other cases. Using  will render as.

If you wish to link to another wikia, read w:c:community:Help:Interwiki link

If you are curious and want to read Wikipedia's explanation between the different linking types and how to use them, feel free to. All of this can be applied to Wikia as well since they are mostly based on the same site structure and technical magic stuff.

4. If you wanted to just remove a stub due to the maximum information that has already been provided, make it clear that you removed the stub using the Edit summary instead of undoing an edit with no clear reason behind it.