Thread:Coljari/@comment-4360159-20190119071247/@comment-36864955-20190119191009

Well first off, I fail to see how no space after commas and periods show “poor structure”.And it's very condescending that you just assume that I have poor grammar, and give me a link to something that would “improve” it.

Furthermore, I also fail to see how my revisions were unclear/unreadable. The one or two sentances that you seperated would've been very clear even without the seperation (In my opinion.)

Finally, I don't recall adding an “unnecessary” hyperlink. The only links that were on the page were:a link to MrDoomBringer's Wikia Page (Someone who was relevant to this topic), and the two videos showing proof of said topic.