Thread:LukeGalaxy/@comment-26397550-20171113140400

Hi! Thank you for your work to fix or update pages. However, I should advise that I've had to undo a lot of the edits as they add information that isn't needed to the page, or change things to inaccurate information, especially with major grammar errors.

I would advise reviewing the Manual of Style and look at decent quality pages similar to the pages you wish to edit before editing more pages as to have a frame of reference of what information should go on the pages. Typically, limited price history and current reseller information isn't needed, for example. The manual of style is more a resource of what only goes on a page rather than what you can do or what you shouldn't do.

Additionally, remember to ensure what you're writing is following proper grammar practices.

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